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Wednesday 29 September 2021

Poison - #MyFriendAlexa



 What’s your Poison... She asked me

I replied, Pain

She seems disappointed with my answer.

I asked, 

What’s yours?

She said...Love

Looking at my own reflection, I enquired, 

How can it be? Aren’t we the same.

She smiled and said......NO





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41 comments:

  1. Very deep. You've used such few words, to say so much. Brilliant!
    Mayuri/Sirimiri

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  2. Manisha - So much said in so few words, wonderfully penned.

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  3. Wow the metaphors. You managed to say so many things in such few words

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  4. Seems a part of deep conversation, I wish I could read more of it!

    Archana Srivastava

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    1. I wish I could wrote more, but I only have this much.

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  5. Deep and beautiful! Wow . Great job

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  6. Beautiful poem...loved the analogy of poison and love..

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  7. Hatred can be my poison which I hope I have overcome

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    1. Definitely, my best wishes are with you.

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  8. Insightful poem. Beautifully penned.

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  9. Fabulously put. This is so hard hitting despite using such less words.

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  10. Short, crisp and deep! Well-written

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  11. Love is pain but also a balm! Well, your lines are amenable to a lot of interpretations.

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  12. Very nice one. Could be seen in various ways.

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  13. Oh man! Loved the metaphor and depth in this one

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  14. I never understand how someone says so much in so few words ina poetry. Beautifully penned

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  15. Deep, sweet and crisp. Very well written in just few words.

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  16. This touched my heart.. Deep and so well expressed in few lines.

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